So this is this being worked on as a rewrite and I must say things have changed since I wrote the book. I’ve learned a lot since and I’m putting that learning into practise!
The book is being uploaded to RoyalRoad so you can read it for free, the link is:
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/54017/welcome-to-eden
It looks like it’s being well received by the community there, so go have a read and let me know what you think!